Comments on: Writing a first sentence.

Comments on: Writing a first sentence. http://www.gettingoffmyass.com/2007/08/23/writing-a-first-sentence/ Just another WordPress weblog Fri, 30 Jul 2010 05:32:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Geoff http://www.gettingoffmyass.com/2007/08/23/writing-a-first-sentence/#comment-4 Geoff Sat, 01 Sep 2007 02:38:54 +0000 http://www.gettingoffmyass.com/2007/08/23/writing-a-first-sentence/#comment-4 I am so flattered. Thank you for reading my book. I hope you are finding it helpful. I've subscribed to your feed and will be checking back in. Um...as for a sentence. Let's try: "Rain fell from the sky like milk from a rancid udder." (I'm on a bit of a simile kick these days.) Best, Geoff I am so flattered. Thank you for reading my book. I hope you are finding it helpful.

I’ve subscribed to your feed and will be checking back in.

Um…as for a sentence. Let’s try:

“Rain fell from the sky like milk from a rancid udder.”

(I’m on a bit of a simile kick these days.)

Best,
Geoff

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